We have been writing a diary entry. To help us edit our work and make it even better we showed our friends in Year 5. They used a marking ladder to see if we had included all the elements a good diary entry needs. they then gave us a WOW - telling us what we had done well and then a NOW - our next step to making our work even better. We will act on these NOW's, edit our work and hopefully have a fabulous diary extract at the end. LOOK OUT FOR THE FINISHED PIECE OF WORK !!!